Sorry for the wait

haven't forgotten about this one
The first was adding pedal markings to the sheet. I couldn’t find a way to hide them.
Don't worry, I can hide them for you when I do a formatting pass once I check the whole thing.
Continuing where I left off at m. 51:
- Would suggest tying over the melody F between m. 51-52
- I don't hear the Bb in the LH on beat 2.5 in m. 52
- The RH G in m. 55 beat 2.5 distracts a bit much from the main melody in my opinion. I would suggest taking it out since you already have the G motion in the left hand
- Not sure I hear the D in the RH of m. 58 beat 1.5
- The end of m. 75 RH should be D-C descending 16th notes instead of just an eighth note D
- I would suggest having the RH follow the main melody more closely in m. 77-78 - the rhythm of the main melodic line in m. 77 and making the last note of 78 D instead of G
- Check the arpeggios in m. 78 again - the bass starts on Bb on beat 1
- You would also include a G in the first chord of m. 83
- I would suggest removing the key change in m. 85-92 - it doesn't seem too necessary.
- The dynamic (f, I would actually recommend ff) would be better placed in m. 92, at the end the crescendo, rather than in 93. You also don't need both the "cresc." and the hairpin (<), just the hairpin will do.
Almost done. Just the last page for me to check after this