Nice! Before we wrap up...
The first couple things are still missing:
- Missing a dynamic
- LH in m. 10 plays F on beat 2.5, not beat 2
- m. 60 - I don't hear the LH G on beat 2.5
- I don't think I hear the last Bb in the LH of m. 85?
m60: the note is more delayed than usual swing but I do still hear it
m85: quite faint but I'm pretty sure it's still there
I really don't hear either of them at all, slow or fast or lowered by an octave. Mind triple checking? Either way though, they both fit musically so I won't block over it.
Are there any other places (preferably many) that you'd recommend? I never add rogue accents to my sheets just because I'm not that great at telling where to, even if they'd be benefical..
Not really. Though my personal preference is actually to use articulations sparingly so that the ones that are there stand out more. That A is just particularly punchy sounding. I don't have any specific suggestions to add them elsewhere but some other iterations of that phrase have that beat highlighted as well if you want to listen through again and decide for yourself.