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Submission Archive / Re: [XBOX360] Fez - "Home" by Apind
« on: Today at 06:48:13 AM »
Well that's unfortunate :/ I'll archive this submission then. The feedback and files will always be here to refer to in the future if you ever feel up to working on it again to resubmit.

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2020 Week 10

Another Symphonic Rain piece! This is an arrangement of what is in my opinion the happiest song in the game :) For this song, I decided to arrange the instrumental rather than the vocal version. The instrumental version is featured far more frequently throughout the game, contains some interesting parts I wanted to write in, and is slightly easier for me to adapt to solo piano.

Symphonic Rain
NEW!   Fay (Instrumental)[MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [Original] 


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I really do not understand this, I'm sorry.
What Levi is requesting (that I agree with) is that you do this research beforehand and provide the game/track information when the sheet is first submitted.

It's most efficient to check the entire sheet at once, which includes both the musical aspects and correctness of information - as such, not having the right game and track title means the submission is incomplete and the correct data has to be verified and entered later. Please be considerate and provide this information upfront :P

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Submissions / Re: [NES] Shadowgate - "Entryway" by Atcero
« on: March 06, 2021, 08:37:27 PM »
Chatted over Discord and fixed the formatting. Good to go :)

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Gotcha :3

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Yup, I don't hear a D in the first measure.

This looks terrific, just two comments left from me:
- The last chord should be rolled
- The ottava lines need not extend the whole measure - they only need to extend as far as the last notehead it applies to. You could also (preferably, in my opinion) use an 8vb instead of 8va. Compare the left vs. right here:


I can make these changes for you if you want due to Finale versions. Let me know! :)

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Fixed the arranger information!

It is a problem that I upload some arrangements with my students?
They work hard for music and for this site, they are accumulating transcriptions which is important for their self-esteem to be uploaded to this site, so they can work on other scores continuously.
I wish this process doesn't stop, is there anything i can do to help you make sure this doesn't happen?

I am continuously available to modify the scores according to your precious advice and suggestions.
I hope you are reasonable towards my requests and the (so important) work of my students.
Greetings
It's not a problem that you and your students are submitting transcriptions to the site. As I have mentioned above, we want to prevent an excessive number of submissions with any one person listed as an arranger. If they are submitting sheets themselves, great! They can submit two sheets per person. But having many submissions with your name on all of them would be unfair to everyone else who is sticking to the limit of two (plus potentially a couple more if they're collaborations) of their own arrangements.

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You're welcome! Final feedback:

Some of the things on your files don't match up with the ones that MSF provided. Specifically:
- The LH notes in measures 14-17 should be flipped downwards so that the cross-staff beams don't overlap
- The G in the right hand in the last measure should be split into an eighth tied to a quarter

A couple of other things as well needed to be tweaked further slightly like the spacing in the last measure and the text within the margins. And the last note in the right hand in the last measure should be a D instead of a B.

Additionally, the game title was spelled incorrectly in the NSM Panel, so I fixed that too. I've edited the submission accordingly. I'll accept if there are no further concerns.

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Fittingly, this is also the last FFV replacement.
Woohoo!

Went through it and it looks pretty good. Just a few small things to comment on:
- You could adjust the spacing in m. 7 slightly so the stem doesn't overlap the top whole note
- m. 20 sounds a bit high compared to everything else around it. Perhaps consider dropping it an octave?
- The cresc. in m. 86 would be extended to the right a bit
- I think the section in m. 107-108 would be easier read in A rather than Bbb...
- Is there supposed to be a circle after the Tempo I in m. 117
- Raise the slur in m. 119 a bit
- Maybe reposition the slur in m. 136 beat 1 a bit so it doesn't go right into the notehead

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Cool, looks much better now :)

A few visual concerns:
- The roll markings in m. 1/8 are a bit far to the left
- The sharps on the F#'s at the beginning of m. 2 and 6 are pretty confusing - the previous measures already play F# and this looks like a change when it's the same pitch. I would suggest taking them out.
- The LH/RH staves are pretty far apart. That's not in itself a problem, but it looks a little odd with this sheet I think since the LH and RH parts are so close together on the piano.
- The right end of the slur in m. 8 could be brought down a bit.

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Submissions / Re: [NES] Shadowgate - "Entryway" by Atcero
« on: March 05, 2021, 10:22:45 PM »
Apologies for the wait :)

This looksgreat, I just have a few small things to comment on:
- The first RH note of each measure is articulated differently in the original - putting staccatos on these would be good.
- I'd suggest writing the dotted quarter tied to the dotted half in m. 4 instead of the opposite. The same goes for m. 6 and 8 since they should will up the measure in the same way.
- Unlike measures 1 and 4, the second note in the left hand is held until the third note - there shouldn't be a rest. You could write it as a dotted half instead of dotted quarter tied to quarter + eighth rest.
- Measure 4, the second left hand note should last for the duration of four eighth notes (write as dotted quarter tied to eighth) and be follow by two eighth rests before the three C's at the end.

I'll grab the formatting (measures numbers and whatever else) after that's updated!

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Could you please use my real name for the arrangement? (Andrea Licheri)
Thanks
Same as in this sheet? I'll take care of it after you confirm.

Additionally, what's the source for this piece and do you have a proper track name?



JacopoTore, as a side note, I notice that you currently have four submissions with your name on them. While a couple extra over the submission limit of two is fine due to collaborations, we kindly ask that you not submit any more this round in the interest of fairness to others.

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Forum Games / Re: The NSM Guess-That-Melody Quiz!
« on: March 05, 2021, 02:18:51 AM »
This quiz is probably a bit unbalanced due to the melodies I could find fitting the theme :) here are the results!

#1 (5/15)
"In the Refugee Camp" – [Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles

Timestamp: 0:12
YouTube Link

Quote from: mastersuperfan
this is another one of the Xenoblade tracks that I will only get if it is "beautiful and relaxing"
Quote from: Latios
well now I know what to avoid

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Cashwarrior1
  • Beenya
[close]

#2 (11/15)
"Viridian Forest" – [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue Version

Timestamp: 0:00
YouTube Link

Also appears in a similar form in Gold/Silver. And the gen 1 and 2 remakes.

Quote from: Kaphita
2 is mt moon
or something from very early pokemon i'll figure

silph co?

mt
something
what else
it's gen 1
lol
team rocket

pokemon mansion

pokemon tower

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Yug Guy
  • Cashwarrior1
  • Kaphita
  • Trasdegi
  • Atcero
  • Beenya
  • braix
  • Weakforced
[close]

#3 (10/15)
"Slots/Minigame" – [NES] Super Mario Bros. 3

Timestamp: 0:00
YouTube Link

Also a minigame theme in a lot of Mario games since. Any of them were marked as correct.

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Static
  • Yug Guy
  • Cashwarrior1
  • Whoppybones
  • Trasdegi
  • Jake Luigi
  • Dekkadeci
[close]

#4 (2/15)
"Twinkle Elementary School" – [NES] EarthBound Beginnings

Timestamp: 0:00
YouTube Link

Many people recognized this as the rather universal clock/bell theme.

Quote from: braix
#4 sounds like the japanese school bell sorry that's all ive got

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Yug Guy
[close]

#5 (3/15)
"Shoot-’Em-Up" – [NDS] Rhythm Heaven

Timestamp: 0:07
YouTube Link

Quote from: mastersuperfan
this was the most memorable RH track for me as a child

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • Whoppybones
[close]

#6 (15/15)
"Great Fairy Fountain" – [N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time

Timestamp: 0:03
YouTube Link

Any version of this theme will do (the OoT version has been wiped off of the face of YouTube). Happy to see that everyone who submitted answers got this one :)

Guessed by:
  • Everyone!
[close]

#7 (1/15)
"Professor Layton’s Theme" – [NDS] Professor Layton and the Curious Village

Timestamp: 1:16
YouTube Link

This one’s rather tricky, since this section is pretty far into the song and not as distinctive as the rest of the melody. Coincidentally, insaneintherain released a cover of this theme shortly after I posted my quiz :P

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
[close]

#8 (5/15)
"Another Medium" – [PC] Undertale

Timestamp: 1:36
YouTube Link

I wasn’t sure how many people would get this one. Turns out a bunch of people do know it!

Quote from: Radiak488417
nice inclusion
that's probably my favorite song from any videogame

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Static
  • Kaphita
[close]

#9 (5/15)
"7:00 P.M." – [3DS] Animal Crossing: New Leaf

Timestamp: 0:21
YouTube Link

This one just consists of two notes, but I think that actually makes it more distinctive than many of the others.

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Static
  • Whoppybones
[close]

#10 (6/15)
"Grass Land" – [Wii] Kirby’s Epic Yarn

Timestamp: 0:19
YouTube Link

epic yarn good music

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Static
  • Yug Guy
  • Kaphita
[close]

#11 (3/13)
"N’s Castle" – [NDS] Pokémon Black/White Version 2

Timestamp: 0:01
YouTube Link

N’s Castle from Black and White uses the same progression, so I had hoped people would recognize it from there. Admittedly, this one was a bit mean. Fortunately, the only person it threw for a loop was MSF.

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Cashwarrior1
  • Trasdegi
[close]

#12 (1/15)
"Lonely Rolling Star" – [PS2] Katamari Damacy

Timestamp: 3:46
YouTube Link

One of my favorite songs ever. It’s really deep into the song so I didn’t expect many people to know this one. Radiak’s got my back for this one though ^^

Guessed by:
  • Radiak488417
[close]

#13 (9/15)
"Game Over / Ending" – [NES] The Legend of Zelda

Timestamp: 0:00
YouTube Link

Quote from: mastersuperfan
>Static uses it and only 1 out of 15 gets it
>Latios uses it and 9 out of 15 get it

Guessed by:
  • mastersuperfan
  • Radiak488417
  • BlueKirby
  • Static
  • Yug Guy
  • Cashwarrior1
  • Whoppybones
  • Atcero
  • Jake Luigi
[close]

And the scores! Congrats to MSF for recognizing all but one of them.



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Sorry for the wait :) haven't forgotten about this one

The first was adding pedal markings to the sheet. I couldn’t find a way to hide them.
Don't worry, I can hide them for you when I do a formatting pass once I check the whole thing.

Continuing where I left off at m. 51:
- Would suggest tying over the melody F between m. 51-52
- I don't hear the Bb in the LH on beat 2.5 in m. 52
- The RH G in m. 55 beat 2.5 distracts a bit much from the main melody in my opinion. I would suggest taking it out since you already have the G motion in the left hand
- Not sure I hear the D in the RH of m. 58 beat 1.5
- The end of m. 75 RH should be D-C descending 16th notes instead of just an eighth note D
- I would suggest having the RH follow the main melody more closely in m. 77-78 - the rhythm of the main melodic line in m. 77 and making the last note of 78 D instead of G
- Check the arpeggios in m. 78 again - the bass starts on Bb on beat 1
- You would also include a G in the first chord of m. 83
- I would suggest removing the key change in m. 85-92 - it doesn't seem too necessary.
- The dynamic (f, I would actually recommend ff) would be better placed in m. 92, at the end the crescendo, rather than in 93. You also don't need both the "cresc." and the hairpin (<), just the hairpin will do.

Almost done. Just the last page for me to check after this ;)

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Looks great, just a couple of small things:
- Bass note in m. 4 beat 4 stays at E instead of dropping down to C#
- Grace notes in m. 14-16 should be B# instead of B

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