Quote from: goldenscruff on May 12, 2024, 12:56:54 PMThis might be overly explicit, but m5-14 the LH could use staccatos b1 and b3 and a tenuto b4. (or just add articulations m5-7 and add simile)I thought about this a bit since I wasn't sure whether to indicate pedal to the user or not. I think it does make sense to make the articulation a little more explicit, though! I don't want to put staccato on beat 1 since as the only bass notes here I'd like them to stick around a bit longer, but beat 1.5/3/3.5 make sense to have staccatos, and yes tenuto on beat 4. Simile sounds good at m. 7
Quote from: goldenscruff on May 12, 2024, 12:56:54 PMI'm hearing the end of m3 as a triplet not tresillo.Ah yep, good catch
Quote from: goldenscruff on May 12, 2024, 12:56:54 PMm15-16,19-20 I'm hearing the horns replay b3 on b4. If it doesn't look too detached, could have the LH replay the same notes on b4.Oh, I never noticed that! The bass doesn't restrike but I think replaying the upper notes on beat 4 of those measures sounds good underneath the melody.
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