Not much
-A nice courtesy bracket in m25 to make it instantly obvious the LH should pick up layer 2 would be cool
-Why is there both a D.S. and forward repeat sign?
-Final LH note of m36 should be an octave lower
-Having the syncopated rhythm drop out in m34 feels anticlimactic at the song's most emotional resolution. I'd say make it like the measures right before it. I do like the decision to simplify the rhythms quite a bit to fit the difficulty of the piece, however.
-Should there be a comma after dark world in the title to make it grammatically correct.
That's it, nice job
-A nice courtesy bracket in m25 to make it instantly obvious the LH should pick up layer 2 would be cool
-Why is there both a D.S. and forward repeat sign?
-Final LH note of m36 should be an octave lower
-Having the syncopated rhythm drop out in m34 feels anticlimactic at the song's most emotional resolution. I'd say make it like the measures right before it. I do like the decision to simplify the rhythms quite a bit to fit the difficulty of the piece, however.
-Should there be a comma after dark world in the title to make it grammatically correct.
That's it, nice job