Rubikium, I accidentally sent my original feedback post before I was finished with it, but it's done now.
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on February 09, 2020, 07:10:31 PMI'd actually prefer 8vb lines here over text prompts. It's just easier to follow and shows the reader exactly what to do.
Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 04:57:55 PM- m45-46 RH sounds like you could make each beat two 8th notes instead of one quarter note, with the second 8th note of each beat having only the upper two notes from the previous 8th note.I had considered this, but I didn't do it for some reason. On second listen it makes sense so I've added it. I've implemented all your other feedback as well, I just need someone to hide the 8vas for me.
Quote from: Rubikium on February 09, 2020, 12:16:19 PM[3DS] Kirby: Planet Robobot - "Time for Dessert!"
Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 06, 2020, 12:26:39 AMPokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky: "Apple Woods"
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Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMBass doesn't play in m. 1/5/9 beat 4.5WHAT how did I miss this...Fixed.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMI'd suggest removing the staccato in m. 2/10 beat 2.5Done.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AM- m. 10: missing the Ab in the second chord like m. 3?I'm assuming you meant measure 11, in which case you're right. Fixed.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMWould recommend making the Eb grace note in m. 14 D# insteadDone.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMI think m. 29 would make more sense using Gb instead of F#?Yeah you're right. Fixed.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMQuite sure the last note in m. 16 is an E as written.Ayyy thanks. I can honestly hear it as either, but an E makes way more sense to me. I was starting to go crazy thinking it was a quarter tone or something...
Quote from: Latios212 on November 09, 2019, 09:22:40 AMDistribution of the music on the pages could be improved a bit as well.Oh yeah I was wondering about this (especially the last page) but since Libera didn't mention it I guess I forgot. Thanks for that.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AM-The copyright/url text is too small; it should be size 10, not 8.Fixed.
-The composer/arranger info should come down a bit so that it's not directly in line with the game name.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AMThe E in the bass at the end of bars 15 and 16 should be an F I think.I agree with m. 15 but I really think it's an E in m. 16. I guess we'll have to get a third opinion, in the meantime I've done m. 15.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AM-I think it'd make a lot more sense to have the Fs in bar 13 in with the right hand chords.Done.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AM-With regards to the chords at the end, I do think that there's another Eb higher up just underneath the top F.Sounds right to me. Thanks for that.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AM-The 8va in bar 37 could start further to the left so that the 8 isn't directly on top of the staccato, which looks a little cluttered.Fixed...not sure how that happened.
Quote from: Libera on November 05, 2019, 02:57:57 AM-I'd bring the systems closer together on page 2 so that the music isn't quite so close to the subtitle. Similarly, on page 3 I'd bring everything down to give the subtitle some more room.I use Notepad, so I'm not sure I can do these. If someone else could help me out with this I'd appreciate it.
Quote from: Static on November 05, 2019, 07:49:32 PMWhen the song repeats, an electric piano plays the melody instead
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